Wikipedia:Vague introductions

In this article, we will delve into the exciting world of Wikipedia:Vague introductions, exploring its origins, its impact on current society and possible future implications. Since its emergence, Wikipedia:Vague introductions has captured the attention of different audiences, generating debates, reflections and mixed emotions. Over the years, Wikipedia:Vague introductions has demonstrated its influence in different areas, from technology to the arts, including politics and popular culture. Through a detailed analysis, we will seek to understand the relevance of Wikipedia:Vague introductions in the contemporary world and its potential to transform the reality around us.

The mist obscuring this picture makes a pretty image, but Wikipedia introductions should not resemble this photo.

A vague introduction is an article lead (WP:LEAD) that begins with non-definitive or otherwise equivocal language, such that only reveals and discusses a concept's ambiguities or peculiarities, rather than its actual substance.

Examples of the wording in such introductions often resemble the form:

  • "There is no clear definition of ..."
  • "There is no one agreed upon definition of ."
  • "Experts do not all agree upon a definition of ..."
  • " has many definitions"

Philosophy articles are particularly susceptible to such vague language for several reasons:

  1. Editors in philosophical subjects may be too polarized to find an agreeable definition
  2. The concepts are typically designed to be abstract and therefore are too often misunderstood to begin with.
  3. Editors in philosophical subjects seek to preserve or amplify known ambiguities rather than attempt to resolve them

The solution may require having separate leads for each major meaning assigned to the topic, rather than using a Cuisinart and blending all the concepts into one paragraph. The most dominant meaning should be given the first paragraph, but no significant usage should be completely omitted from the new lead.

(Almost) content-free leads

A variant of the "vague lead" is a lead in which editors have removed all examples from the lead, so that the lead describes the topic in such a generalized way that the reader gains little information about the topic and gets no information about the most important thinkers, bands, or organizations that are associated with the topic. Sometimes this is done to avoid edit wars and accusations of giving "undue weight" to specific thinkers or organizations associated with the topic.

  • In this first example below, which is a "vague lead" or an almost "content-free lead", the editors of the article on the "Foo subculture", a fictional punk subculture, have avoided giving any specific information about the "Foo subculture". While this does ensure that the lead does not give undue weight to any examples, it also fails to help the reader get a good understanding of the Foo subculture–what do the members look like? What are their political views? What are the leading bands in the Foo subculture?):

☒N Foo subculture is a subculture that is part of the hardcore punk subculture. Individuals in the Foo subculture dress with distinctive styles of clothing, hair and adornment. The Foo subculture is associated with various political alignments. The Foo subculture has a unique philosophy. There are a number of bands that are associated with the Foo subculture. Foo subculture members have differing views on recreational drug use.

  • This version below is arguably better, because it gives the reader more specific information about how Foo subculture members dress, the bands they listen to, their political views, philosophies and views on drug use (all references are fictional, for the sake of giving an example):

checkY Foo subculture is a youth subculture in North America and parts of Europe that is part of the hardcore punk subculture. The Foo subculture emerged in the early 1980s. Individuals in the Foo subculture dress with distinctive styles of clothing and hair and adornment, which often include brightly colored hair, mohawks and, especially since the 1990s, very closely cropped hair; ripped jeans, combat pants or cargo shorts; PVC boots or canvas sneakers and faux leather jackets. Members of the Foo subculture generally avoid wearing leather boots, belts or jackets, because animal rights is a view that has been associated with the subculture since the 1980s. Foo subculture members have various political alignments, with most members adhering to pacifism or anarchism; protesting and demonstrating about these causes is an important activity for members of the scene. The Foo subculture is based around the philosophy of authenticity; members of the Foo scene who are deemed not to understand the scene's philosophies of pacifism and animal rights may be labelled as poseurs (fakes). There are a number of bands that are associated with the Foo subculture, with the most important bands being Discharge and Crass. Foo subculture members have divergent views on recreational drug use; most Foo scene members believe in straight edge living–avoiding the use of alcohol, tobacco and illegal drugs; a minority, called "Hard Foos" avoid most drugs but believe that marijuana is a spiritual substance that enhances consciousness.

See also


  1. ^ Jones, Xshosa. Animal rights and the Foo subculture. Acme Publishing, 2014
  2. ^ Smith, Sue. Political views of the Foo subculture. Acme Publishing, 2015.
  3. ^ Clarke, Janice. Top bands of the Foo subculture. Acme Publishing, 1989.
  4. ^ Jones, Malika. Foos and drug use: a history, 1980-2000. Acme College Press, 2004